Writing Placement essay for Writing 3

Hello.
My name is Haruka K. I am 20 years old. I’m from Kumamoto. I have a young sister. And, I have a Yorkshire terrier. We love him very much. My hobby is playing the Japanese drums. Because, I belonged to Japanese drums club when I was high school student. We practiced the drums so hard. So, we could take part in a contest of Japanese drums in Kyushu. We retired the club, but we sometimes play the drums yet.
We like to play the Japanese drums. I can feel refreshed by playing the drums. And, I went to Minnesota in this summer vacation. My host family is warm person. I got a genial welcome. They are Peter and Kelly. They are very kindness. So, they helped me everything everyday. Therefore, there is nothing else to take the strain. Above all things, my host mother, Kelly’s smile is special for me. I can not think thank you enough. In Minnesota, I examined about Zoo. Especially, I could find differences Kumamoto zoo and Minnesota zoo. First of all, Minnesota zoo is larger scale than Kumamoto zoo. The Minnesota zoo is three times the size of as large as Kumamoto zoo. I was surprised at that area. And, I felt that it Minnesota’s people make a point of Species Survival Plan. Second, I found about barrier free. Minnesota zoo is as same as Kumamoto zoo. There are multipurpose toilets everywhere. And, Ground is a slight slope or flat land. So, it is easy for challenged person to watch all animals. Therefore, I had really good time in Minnesota for one month. Peter and Kelly made me happy. Thank you very much.

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To learn computer 6th essay

Introduction
These days, to use computer is the most important in our life. I think that someday, computer is more claver than human’s brain. Perhaps Computer has already more claver than human’s brain. As has been mentioned Computer is convenient and fast. Computer is helped a lot of people so much. So, I will explain about to use computer.

Body
When I was 14 years old, we start to learn personal computer in junior high school. I still remember the first time. It is game to use personal computer. We enjoyed playing game of personal computer. So, the class interested me in using personal computer. And, in those days, we interested in e-mail of personal computer. I sent many e-mail to a lot of friends. Consequently, I can use personal computer, little by little. And, I could type first too.
And now, I often use personal computer in English class. There are Ｗriting class, Speaking class, Reading class, listening class and so on. And, we have a blog each one each one. We have to renew within limits.
And, I have a host family in Minnesota. So, we can communicate with them sometimes. The other day, my host family sent Christmas present and lovely letter. So, I sent e-mail to them immediately. I thought that computer is useful. If I did not have computer, we can not send e-mail.
Recently, many company look skill of computer. It occur wages that vary with skill. So, a lot of college students try to get computer skill in school days.

Conclusion
Therefore, to use computer is the most important to live our life comfortably. So, I want to get computer skill more. I thought that Eibei students are lucky, because of we can use computer in class everyday. So, we can became accustomed to computer. I think that to learn computer is very important.

5th essay Message of Commercial

We watch TV everyday. No matter when we watch TV, we can match a lot of Commercial. What means Commercial is? I checked mean of Commercial. The dictionary said that " Commercial is message, advertisement, and transmission". I could understand so much. Because, we often watch Commercial between TV program and next TV program. Commercial want to tell us several message. These message are different according to purpose. For example, something to new item, environmental pollution, grecery, clothes, new shop, movie and so on. I can say another more.
Why did Commercial prosper in our life?
First of all, I thought that, people know Commercials necessarily.
Second, I thought out the reason to prosper Commercial in our life. It's humor of Commercial. Commercial is very short program. It is about 30- second. So, It's very inportant to impress many people.
Accordingly, Commercial has effect. I thought that, it is easy line. If famous actor said easy line, people can memorize thesewords. And, Commercial is used famous music. So, we can memorize early and easily. I thought that, TV Commercial is the most influental advertisement. TV Commercial can have a major impact on your taste and lifestyles. That is impressive. Is that correct answer? I thought that is mistake. I'm scared of a potent factor. Therefore, it is so important to decide my mind. Recentry, people are apt to be influenced by Commercial of TV. I want to be stable person more.
By the way, My favorite Commercial is vehicular Commercial. Because, the Commercial is very nice view. I can see good spots. Maybe, it is foreign country. I like to watch beautiful view on Commercial. And, I like classical music, too.
So, I want to use classical music on Commercial, more.
I hope to increase Commercial, better.

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Community Life

Community life is very big topic. It is difficult for me. But, I will argue about Community life. What is Community life? I think that Community life is person and person. State quite simply, Community life is made by people. If there is not people, it does not say Community life. So, It is so important to communicate with people each other.Because, I think that it is nice community life where people have their network. These network are simple. It is to talk to each other in Community life only. There is no shortcut more than to talk each other.
For example, when I was elementary school student. I could see activities in Comunity life for progress. First of all, In the early morning, people conduct "greeting movement". Some parent stand school zone for student's safety. Then, a lot of students greet standing parents on the street. I think this activity is very good for children to greet other people.I could not greet other people,first. But, I could greet with other people for this activity. So, I am grateful for this activity. In the next place, I could remember that there took place several game for children in Community center. Everyone can use the Community center. So, many people gathere in the Community center. I could make friends. And, I learned about life in society too.
Third, I thought that "kairanban" . It is message board. It is tradditional system. If I catch the message board, I have to autograph. Next, I have to bring the message board to neighborhood. Then, I could communicate with neighborhood.

Therefore, I thought that Community life is person to person. If there is no people, it does not make up Community life. And, I thought that it is the best to communicate with people.

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Movie Review Toystory

At first, I will introduce about substance. The movie was made by Disney in 1995.
Andy likes toy very much. He is 6 years old. And, his favorite toy is so attractive. It is Woody of cowboy toy.
If Andy goes out in his room, many toys begin to move. It's amezing!
Woody is leader in these toys.
Oneday, Andy's birthday came. These toys worry about new toy.
Sure enough, Woody was deprived NO,1 seat. New toy, "Space ranger Buzz Light Year" came to Andy's room.
When Woody and Buzz quarrel about No,1 seat, they dropped down from Andy's room. They tried to back home, but, Shido catched them . Shido is cunning boy. He likes to broke toy and remodel. He is very scary. All toys afraid of him.
Therefore, they begin to escape from Shido's house.

Second, I will introduce about mein character.
WOODY: It's cool man. He is constable who put on cowboy hat and badge too.

BUZZ: He has high tecnology. He is attraction figure who struggle with space enemy.

Mr,POTATO HEAD: He is potato toy. He is ironic and irritable old man. But, I like him. He is pretty.

ALIEN: They are free gift of crane game. They are so innocent character. They has the habit of saying... " heart is linking".
They are cute alien.

HAMM: He is pig MOney box. He is obstinate and have a good head on his shoulders. He is cute too!

SERGENT: They are miniature doll of soldier. Main mission is peobe.

SLINKY: He is dachshund. He can extend or shrivel of his body because, He made of spring. He likes Woody so much.

REX: He is toy of dinasaur. But, his height is only 30 centimerter. He is timid and so kind dinasaur.

BOPEEP: She is beautiful lamp stand. She has good curve. Woody loves her.

Therefore, I though that Disney want to tell us that" plese cherish something to use". I thought that at first. And, I have second thought about direction. To my shame, I could not use something precious. So, I want to use something treasure, more.

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My favorite space to relax and sleep

My favorite place to relax and sleep
My grand mother’s house is my favorite place to relax and sleep. I’d like to explain why. My grand mother lives in Yatsushiro. So, there still has a rich natural environment. And, air is a clear atmosphere. It is a quiet place to relax and sleep.
River
There is a little river near my grand mother’s house. The river is very small and shallow. So, I and my sister often play with water on summertime. And, we can hear the murmur of a steam. There inhabit many fishes or insects.
Train
There is a little station near my grand mother’s house too. There are two station attendants. They warmly welcomed their guest at the ticket gate every time. Their smile is very comfortable. Their smile can heal my heart.
Rice field
It has many rice fields in Yatsushiro. I thought that rice field is quaint view. The view is changed by rice field. For example, I can see many colors green or brown or yellow. So, I can enjoy watching the view. And, I enjoy going for a stroll too.
Grand mother
My grand mother is 77 years old. And, she is lives by herself. But, she is very active and cheerful. If I go her house, she welcomes me with her smile. I like her smile so much. I’m helped by her. So, I can relax and sleep well.
Conclusion
Therefore, my favorite place to relax and sleep is my grand mother’s house. The place is so important for me. Because, if I go there, I can relieve some of my stress. And, I can feel love of people.

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6th essay Restaurant

I found a good restaurant the other day. The retaurant is "daruma". There is near my house. And, the restaurant is locates Hakuzan street. Why did I discover daruma? Ii is my part - time job. Daruma is managing by chief, two women and three men. Daruma's chief and employees are very kind and have a good head on theirs shoulders considerate so much.
Also, food and something to drink are very delicious. Especially, Yamaimo teppan and Shio hormon are recommendation of Daruma. The two foods often are ordered by guest.
My university friends often come to "Daruma". Mai chan came to Daruma with her boy friend the other day too!

So, I 'd love for you to come with me. I promise guest to spend good time.

By the way, We went to Daruma with my family. When I go there, there was full of people. But, One table seat came open at just. So, we can sit a table. And, we ordered many foods right now. We probably ordered 8 foods and 2 drink to each of us.
Therefore, we had eaten sufficiently. But, for some reason or other, I can eat the ice cream served for dessert. It was delicious too so much! We spent a great and nice time in Daruma! We will go there again.

Fifth Essay - Movie

I like to watch a movie very much. So, I often go a movie with my friend or my family. But, I still remember the first time. When I was 17 years old, I received intense touching. The movie title is “Ima,ainiyukimasu”.A movie starring Nakamura Shidou and Takeuchi Yuko. I love Nakamura Shidou very much. He is so cool and nice guy. We were looking forward to watching the movie with my friend. This movie was very impressive and emotional story. When the movie finished, we cried with feeling. Almost people were crying together. And, The movie’s song was “Hana” written by Orange range. This song is very good. So match the movie. So, I can not forget this movie. Second, my favorite movie is “Holly Potter”. I often went to movie for watching with my family. This story is wide appeal. So, my father and mother watching this movie too. To watch movie is very simple. And, we enjoy watching and listening. To watch movie gives me a thrill. Therefore, I like to watch a movie!

Forth Essay - Kumamoto

I will talk about famous spots in Kumamoto. Because, Kumamoto prefecture has a lot of famous spots. So, I thought that I want to examine famous spots each other. And, on one’s examine, I want to discover new spots.
First of all, Kumamoto castle is very publicity. Kumamoto castle is well-known stone wall. The stone wall is very sharp. Therefore, mostly people can’t climb there. Also, And, contrary to all appearance, 250 years have passed since it completed.
By the way, Who builds Kumamoto castle do you know? Kumamoto castle was built by Katou Kiyomasa. And, Kumamoto castle has two names. “Ginnan castle “is a nickname.
Second, That is Suizenji Park. Suizenji Park is very beautiful garden. And, There is non normal garden. There is a shrine. So, many people come to there New Year’s Day. People pay homage at a shrine.
Third, It is Mt, Aso. Mt, Aso has the biggest caldera in the world. Mt. Aso has a lot of spots to visit another. For example, Kusasenri, Kadorydominion and Mt. Aso farm land. If you come to Kumamoto, Please go to there.
Forth, It is Lake Ezu. There are near my house soon. Lake Ezu so clear water and cool. So, I often go walking the lake after dinner. And, the lake live animals. I can watch firefly on June. It is very beautiful and impressive.
Therefore, Kumamoto has many famous spots. But, I want to know famous spots in Kumamoto more and more. I want to discover new spot!

Third Essay Friend

I will talk about my friend in Kumamoto Gakuen University. I have a lot of friends in college now. But, I did not have friend at first. However, we spend during same time, we become all good friends. So, The number of friends has been increasing even now.
I still remember the first time. We went to Nishigoshi for freshman camp. I was very nervous. And,I felt secure about several things. But, these scares were shatter at once. Because, many people began to talk about small talk with me. So, I could socialize each other. Therefore, I could made friends when I was freshman.
Also, I made friends in club too. I belong to the ESS club and baseball team. There are a lot of people in ESS club. About 60 people. Everyone so goodness! So, we enjoy talking and speaking English for a week. And, we often go to Joyfull for eat dinner with. Another club, I enjoy watching to play baseball. They play baseball for three week. I am a team secretary in baseball club. There are 9 menbers in club. Manager has a lot of to do.Freshman are 4 people, second form are 3 people and third form are 2 people. We are on good terms with each other. Freshman are so cute and vigor. Third form are very clever. They always indicate on we have to do. We depend on their cooperation. And, we often talk about player. Player are very kind too. So, I am happy . I can work team secretary’s job.
Therefore, I made a lot of friends in Kumamoto Gakuen University. I can enjoy spending time with friends everyday.

Proto-portfolio

1==snip
1.1. 1st essay (self introduction)

• Self introduction
  
• 170 words (in your essay [150+20])
  
• 2007.5.17th

1.2. Second essay (campus life)

• Campus life
  
• 216 words (in your essay [200+16])
  
• 2007.6.5th

1.3. 3rd essay (topic of your choice)

• Friend
• 252 words (in your essay [250+2])
  
• 2007.6.25

1.4. 4th essay (original perspective on Kumamoto)

• Kumamoto
• 277 words (in your essay [250+27])
  
• 2007.6.26

1.5. Best essay: Which of those [four] essays do you believe is [the best] & why?

Second Essay My campus life

My campus life is very fun. Because, I could have many friends than when I was freshman. And, I enjoy studying English more. My favorite thing is the best in college is to talk to friends. So, we often go bakery. we talk to small talk for many hours. And, we consult with my friend about a matter of study each other too. Therefore, I love friends so much. They are kind whenever. So, I can enjoy sending campus life everyday. Also, subject of Britain and America's teacher almost are very kindness. So, class is fun! But,we are busy at our abroad induction. Everyone are studying English and managing homework everyday. Therefore, I am looking foward to hosting in summer vacation. At one time, I already norvous very much. By the way, I belong to the ESS club. ESS is English Speaking Society. We enjoy activing about one time for a week. Last summer vacation, we went to Okinawa for sightseeing. We ate "Goya-chanpuru","Mimiga", "Taco rice", "Ice cream" and so on! So, my club is very activity. Also, I belong to baseball club of Kumamoto Gakuen University too. But, I can not play baseball. Therefore I am a team secretary. Beside, I enjoy watching baseball game. Therefore, I am spending a happy and busy campus life!

First Essay seif-introduction

Hi! My name is Kitaoka Haruka. I am 19 years old. I live in Suizenji in Kumamoto. I have five familys. Father,Mother, Sister and my pet Shou. Shou is Yorkshire terrier. He is four years old. He is loved by family very much. I am studying English everyday. But, it is so difficult to talk to forien people by English. So, I　have　to studey English more. By the way, My hobby are listening to music. I like Omarion and Usher. His voice is very nice. I am healed to his voice.And, I enjoy playing the Japanese drums too. I belonged to Japanese drums club in high school student. Therefore,I still play the Japanese drums at times. To play drums can get away from the stress of city life. And, It is very important to play music with someone. Many heart be one heart. Other my hobby is go shopping! I like to go shopping so much. But, I do not have a enough money. So, I often do window shopping.

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